Pubblicazione per conto di mia moglie. Attualmente sta cercando opportunità di tesi di laurea magistrale al di fuori della sua università in AI/Data Science, ML e Deep Learning, ma non sta andando bene. C’è qualche problema con il curriculum? Sta migliorando il suo tedesco, sta imparando il B1 al momento, ma anche per le posizioni in inglese è stata una delusione. Qualsiasi suggerimento o suggerimento è gradito!
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di Rambo-005
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It is a bit all over the place. Have a chronological order of education and work experience, run it through an AI if you don’t bother to check for orthography and reduce the personal statement to max 2 FULL sentences not a combination of bullet points. No need to include former work places in the personal statement – German format CV usually does not include a summary at all, but if you still want to include one rephrase it.
Cut down on projects and only include the most relevant ones.
Keep the timelines in order. As you have it now you have your most recent education last, but your most recent work first
Are those projects part of your degree? If so, also cut them down immensely.
The career summary also looks odd on cvs in Germany. Its basically your motivation letter condensed, so can be fully dropped.
Career Summaries are very American. Did she spend half a page describing courses she is taking?
I think her CV reflects her lack of understanding of German work environments.
Timeline, get rid of the career summary and replace it with personal information/contact information. Line up the dates in the same row as the heading and make sure subheadings for projects for example are more clearly identifiable as subheading. Maybe look at a few formatting examples for CVs because it’s a little chaotic.